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“I need you like a heart needs a beat’’

“Apologize’’

By One Republic ft. Timbaland

This is my strategy

Friends Narritive

What my story is all about is a little kid called Rangi and he had a friend called Jason, now Jason was a friend that you could rely on. One time someone lied to Jason and told him that Rangi called him ugly and fat, and Jason said “But why would Rangi say something like that to me” and then Jason said to Rangi “Why would you say that”  and someone told Rangi that Jason said he is poor and stupid then when Rangi heard that well he got really sad and asked Jason “Why he said that” but actually someone lied.

After Rangi arranged a fight to happen at 4:00 o’clock at the park and Jason said he will be there and when this happened they said why would you say that to each other and Jason said, I just said why would you say that and then they heard that someone has spread the rumors.

Then Rangi said can we end this because I don’t want to hurt you and get into heaps of trouble then we won’t be able to be friends again and talk and have fun. Rangi said he was sorry for all the trouble that he went through. Rangi and Jason became friends after the lies and arguments they had.

I think I'm getting better

I think I'm getting better now with all of the smiley faces.

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The best I've done so far

My worst mistake

My worst mistake

My worst mistake was when I slipped off the slide into a pool.

Because I landed on my back and the sound of me hitting the pool didn’t sound so good then my sister looked at my back and it was all red and it stung so badly.

The way I reacted was loud, I screamed very loud that it hurt my sisters ears and she told me to be quiet. After I finished screaming my sister got a ice pack for my back and that hurt because it was cold and it stung against my back.

Only if I didn’t jump off that slide and landed on my back, but still making the mistake that I made was a bad choice also I didn’t think about me slipping and landing on my back. Although my sister was laughing because she said I looked so funny when I landed and that sort of made me laugh to.

Holiday reading

New Cover

If you could design a new cover for the book what would it look like?  Draw a picture.

Post it onto your blog with the following information.

- Title The Last Thirteen

- Author James Phelan

- Type of Book Mystery, Action

- Why your cover is better people who loves mystery or action.