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Friday 29 August 2014

Telling where

Telling Where

L.I. Elaboration

Jack and Annie started through the cloud forest.  They walked around huge trees draped with moss.  They pushed past tall shrubs and leafy plants.

What does the word shrub mean? A wooden plant smaller than a tree, or a trunk.

What is elaboration? Planned with painstaking attention.

Choose one of these to elaborate on by telling ‘where’. At the beach

At the beach or
At the top of the sky tower

At the beach? There are people playing games and kids running around. Seagulls flapping their wings and  eating other peoples food. There are families eating ice cream and swimming in the water with their toys.

1 comment:

Isabella said...

Hi Rangi

I thought that your poem was great. You have done what you were told. Keep up the great work.

Bella

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