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Monday 15 September 2014

Fence

Fence

This girl is thinking about how great her life is and wishing that it could never end yet she was sad. Why is she sad because she has just been told that she has to move to another country called New Zealand, now she is scared and shy.  The girl is going to remember this place that she has always loved.

She is smelling the beautiful flowers and feeling the wrecked fence and can taste orange juice also she sees the beautiful shiny sea.  She can hear the birds tweeting and sadness all around her as she cries and throws her flower petals over the cliff.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Beautiful writing Rangi well done! Have you ever had to move to a new country or change schools? I wonder how scary that must be.

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