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Friday 19 September 2014

The Fence

Fence

This girl is thinking about how great her life is and wishing that it could never end yet she was sad. Why is she sad because she has just been told that she has to move to another country called New Zealand, now she is scared and shy.  The girl is going to remember this place that she has always loved.

She is smelling the beautiful flowers and feeling the wrecked fence and she can see the beautiful shiny sea.  She can hear the birds tweeting and feels sadness all around her as she cries and throws her flower petals over the cliff.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Beautiful use of describing words Rangi, Well done. I wonder what would of happen to the girl if this story carried on. Do you think she would have made many friends once she moved to New Zealand?

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