Fast 5

Favourite Movie

What is your all-time favorite movie and why? Write 3-4 paragraphs persuading readers to watch this film.

- Hooks the reader with a strong sentence about the film

- I included the genre

- I stated who it appeals to (the audience)

- I gave a summary of the action without the ending

- I mentioned strengths of the movie e.g. the plot, acting, costumes

Fast & Furious 5

Fast & Furious 5 is a rated PG movie and it is all about a heist for $100 million dollars and Vin Diesel/Dominic Toretto has created a crew to help him for this heist most are well known people in the Fast & Furious generation movie.

Fast and furious is an action movie with shooting and fighting, Vin Diesel is trying to find some fast cars to get away and he has to make a plan and how they get away.

Vin Diesel’s plan is successful and his team have stolen the safe and then he shares all of the money with each person in the team and then goes and lives in Rio, Brazil.

The End

The Fence

Fence

This girl is thinking about how great her life is and wishing that it could never end yet she was sad. Why is she sad because she has just been told that she has to move to another country called New Zealand, now she is scared and shy.  The girl is going to remember this place that she has always loved.

She is smelling the beautiful flowers and feeling the wrecked fence and she can see the beautiful shiny sea.  She can hear the birds tweeting and feels sadness all around her as she cries and throws her flower petals over the cliff.

Fence

Fence

This girl is thinking about how great her life is and wishing that it could never end yet she was sad. Why is she sad because she has just been told that she has to move to another country called New Zealand, now she is scared and shy.  The girl is going to remember this place that she has always loved.

She is smelling the beautiful flowers and feeling the wrecked fence and can taste orange juice also she sees the beautiful shiny sea.  She can hear the birds tweeting and sadness all around her as she cries and throws her flower petals over the cliff.

Xtra math

wow I only got 4 wrong I need to inprove.

Telling where

Telling Where

L.I. Elaboration

Jack and Annie started through the cloud forest.  They walked around huge trees draped with moss.  They pushed past tall shrubs and leafy plants.

What does the word shrub mean? A wooden plant smaller than a tree, or a trunk.

What is elaboration? Planned with painstaking attention.

Choose one of these to elaborate on by telling ‘where’. At the beach

At the beach or

At the top of the sky tower

At the beach? There are people playing games and kids running around. Seagulls flapping their wings and  eating other peoples food. There are families eating ice cream and swimming in the water with their toys.

Soccer Explanation

Soccer

Soccer is a 90 minute game and it is one of my favorite sport and I will be telling you about soccer and about the rules, famous players and the positions.

Some of the positions in soccer is a  striker, defender, midfielder and left wing, right wing, center back, left midfielder, right midfielder. The position I like to play is a striker. I like to be a striker because I get the ball most of the time and always score for others.

The rules in soccer is slide tackles have to be clean or else if you injure a player you will be in trouble and no handball or else you will get a yellow card. You’re not allowed to jump on others and you can’t be offside. Also if you argue with the referee then you may be in trouble.

Now I will be talking about famous soccer players. One of the best strikers is Lionel Messi because he has scored lots of goals in his career and the teams that he plays for are FC Barcelona and his national team, Argentina. Also a great left wing player is Neymar Jr he is well known in Brazil because he has scored so many perfect and impossible goals. Neymar’s teams that he plays for are FC Barcelona and Brazil.

My favorite soccer player is Cristiano Ronaldo because he  is very skillful and scores most of the goals. The teams that he has played for is Manchester United, Real Madrid and his international team is Portugal and Portugal is very happy for him.

Soccer is a 90 minute game and I have just told you the positions, famous players also the rules. I  hope you have learn’t how to play this game and play it with your friends or family members.

Rangi

Space Jump

On Monday there was a show called Space Jump and there was two people called Tie & Naomi.
It was like a two person show and the acted out as characters and they were scientist and a alien, characters from the books. They're was a act scene about Goldilocks and the three bears and a boy called Ducati had to act as a girl and it was pretty funny. Throughout the story will had to stand up and sing/actions with them. The we took pictures after the acting was all over.